Dissolve

28 11 2011

A silent walk
Along the bay
The weary strings
Begin to fray

Your empty words
Your callous touch
Your stoic face
It’s all too much

The glaring lamps
The snaking lanes
The drenched stray
Stumbles in the rain

No more he asks,
No more you say,
As he dissolves,
You walk away

 

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2 responses

1 12 2011
konika

pretty cool. Loved the sentence structures and word play. :)

1 12 2011
Pazz

Thanks :) Feels good to be writing and getting feedback again

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