Ship is my Country…
25 03 2008When I was one and twenty,
I finished B.Com
But even after that
I found no kaam.
Interview after interview
I was not clearing
So I enrolled myself
For marine engineering.
But it was vary hard,
Not bachho ka khel,
If I failed,
They wouldn’t let me sail.
So I studied and studied,
Night after night.
And then in exam,
I wrote everything right!
Now since I was topper
I got a good offer,
All gain, no lose
I joined luxury cruise
Now ship is country,
Sea is my home,
Duty is my life
But who is my wife??


hmm… funny in parts…though i could sorta relate to it.
ps- in the 2nd last line of the 2nd last stanza - is it mean to be loss or is “lose” intentional ?
intentional…forced rhyme with cruise
Hahha!! I actually know someone who fits this!!! *refuses to take name for fear of life*
lol u know this tshirt kya?
I am sensing some ‘PK’ influence in this poetry writing style you’ve adopted recently…=P
This was pretty funny….the lose/loss thing had me confused for a bit, but I saw the word cruise and then it all coalesced into something meaningful =D
woah there….thats no PK influence tut tut! I always wrote crap like this…just never posted it!
Woah there yourself! I am sensing a fairly defensive tone here =P
of course lol, my stuff is 100% woriginal
This is good to know