Ship is my Country…

25 03 2008

When I was one and twenty,
I finished B.Com
But even after that
I found no kaam.

Interview after interview
I was not clearing
So I enrolled myself
For marine engineering.

But it was vary hard,
Not bachho ka khel,
If I failed,
They wouldn’t let me sail.

So I studied and studied,
Night after night.
And then in exam,
I wrote everything right!

Now since I was topper
I got a good offer,
All gain, no lose
I joined luxury cruise

Now ship is country,
Sea is my home,
Duty is my life
But who is my wife??



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9 responses

27 03 2008
konika

hmm… funny in parts…though i could sorta relate to it. ;)
ps- in the 2nd last line of the 2nd last stanza – is it mean to be loss or is “lose” intentional ?

27 03 2008
Pazz

intentional…forced rhyme with cruise

28 03 2008
enit

Hahha!! I actually know someone who fits this!!! *refuses to take name for fear of life*

28 03 2008
Pazz

lol u know this tshirt kya?

28 03 2008
Aishwariya

I am sensing some ‘PK’ influence in this poetry writing style you’ve adopted recently…=P

This was pretty funny….the lose/loss thing had me confused for a bit, but I saw the word cruise and then it all coalesced into something meaningful =D

28 03 2008
Pazz

woah there….thats no PK influence tut tut! I always wrote crap like this…just never posted it!

29 03 2008
Aishwariya

Woah there yourself! I am sensing a fairly defensive tone here =P

29 03 2008
Pazz

of course lol, my stuff is 100% woriginal

31 03 2008
Aishwariya

This is good to know :P

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