With tales of Summers,
Winters and Springs.
With borrowed metaphors,
Amongst other things.
With flowers and birds,
Of vibrant hues,
With memories sweet,
Of me and you.
With joy and sadness
Calmness and rage,
I unsuccessfully try
To fill up a page.
Inspiration, perhaps,will come another time.
Until then, kindly bear with this rhyme.
Ah indeed. Go read my blog. Abhi isi wakt!
haa,haa…………..this might have been funny at one time !
funny at one time….what’s that supposed to mean?
why does my blog show as old GTC ?
hahaha…..hey i liked this one!!!
its got a sort of resigned dry humour……..its nice!
I like this one. I don’t claim to get the humour completely- I mean I know how this could be seen as an attempt at humour, but still…
Anyways, I like how you’ve used the cliches with the intention of sounding cliched…adds a sense of novelty to the whole piece actually.
Looking forward to reading more of your work in the future
It was quite cool..
i didn’t get the humour coz’ I haven’t read a lot of poems to get to know what cliche is…
Still..
I think this is very very good.
What? ….are you kidding me. Look up cliche on google.com
dude i know what cliche is….
I don’t know if the poem has used cliched verses…